hey i really like how you're showing your life through your writings. i checkd out your blogs and you relly do paint quite the picture

keep up what you're doing!
the only critique i can think of is how you structure your blogs. while you write at a good length, it needs more paragraph indents and such. most pppl might find it hard to read an entire blog with few breaks. if you indent more often (like a new line for each sentence said in a convo), it lets the reader digest more easily.
ok now i'm writing too much haha but either way, hope i helped! best of luck!
www.jckychng.blogspot.comi'm new to blogging too, so help me out too if you can!