Will you judge my blogs?

I'd love to hear what you guys have to say about my blogs at

http://www.existensis.com
http://www.clownjazeera.com
http://www.jaypeemorgan.com

Thank you!

Vago

vagobunny

existensis was a lot of fun. But there was SO much going on I couldn't really deal...I didn't k now where to start and had a hard time settling down into it. seemed a bit disorganized. still....lots of content which is good. And I LOVED the obama pictures!!\


The clown one was a lot more organized and looked quite well kept. Nice job!

-MC
www.thewildercoast.com

Wildercoast

existensis was a lot of fun. But there was SO much going on I couldn't really deal

Oh, I agree totally. If I run across a blog that sticks advertising in the middle of a post where I can't ignore it, I move on.

Your page has entirely too much "stuff" loading and some broken links. There are numerous errors like this where the "stuff" isn't even rendering on your site:

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Steve

HI there,
Your first blog is down for construction, but I did check out the clowns blog.  I like it, but watch the color of the font against a dark background.  Also, IMO, a little too many choices on the home page.

yournontox